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Jiao

She was a long awaited child, This delicate flower of the East. Maternal love turns into fear. Her babe’s cheek bears the mark of beast. One side is pure and fine of line, The other ravaged by dark stain. Copious tears for her are shed. Her mother’s tears are shed in vain. Dainty and perfect in all ways Except for hated mark on face. Exposed the more exquisite right, The left is draped in folds of lace. And thus it goes throughout the years, Attracting some, repelling more. Fearing to go without a veil At times afraid to leave her door. A seer, with pity for Jiao. Predicts that love will set her free, Releasing hope in her young heart, Sometime, somehow, ‘twould come to be. And lo, he comes to lift the veil. On her disgrace he leaves a kiss. She feels the beauty of his soul And in her heart a perfect bliss. Her loveliness now in reveal. Right side of face still soft and pale. On the left side, once sadly marred, A delicacy of flowers trail. Written by Joyce Johnson 3/9/2011 Written for Constance's contest "Tell Her Story" won no. 9 "Jiao" Chinese Feminine name, meaning delicate, tender, beautiful.

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Date: 3/11/2011 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of Constance, Joyce
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Date: 3/11/2011 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your Jiao winning in Constance's contest "Tell Her Story" Joyce. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2011 6:43:00 AM
So pleased to see this awesome poem in the winners' circle, Joyce. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2011 12:29:00 AM
wow, the name you gave her SO fits this story, Joyce and this story is divine. Truly a lovely and unique story. A big congratulations for you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:39:00 PM
CGRATS to you joyce for the special win in this contest.. very delicate..;) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:02:00 PM
What a beautiful name for this awesome story. Way to go Joyce. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 3/10/2011 5:37:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your fantastic win in Tell Her Story .. a wonderful write and lovely name too.. exciting lines my friend..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:47:00 PM
a very deep passionate story that flows from a heart and soul so compassionate for sure,,I wish you all the best in the contest,,and I also want to thank you for all your visits to my words and for all the words that you have left behind,,,,and deeply I want to Thank You for your comment on my write titled Fantasia,,that is indeed the first time anyone ever stated that one of my writes, flowed from a mans or male point of view,,Thank You again,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:02:00 PM
Great story in poetry form..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good luck in the contest...I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for the support and encouragement on my blog..Sara
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Date: 3/9/2011 12:59:00 PM
Very nice poem...Good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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Date: 3/9/2011 9:53:00 AM
Joyce, this is such a sweet and moving poem -- the flowers on her face being left by a kiss from one who senses her inner beauty. A beautiful and creative write. Constance is sure to love it as I do. Love the poet too! Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:10:00 AM
as delicate as it gets, joyce.. 'm getting more fond of your jiao--" dainty and perfect in all way" much like your intricate imagery... good luck in the contest, a sure winner! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/8/2011 9:40:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Joyce, I love that name Jiao~~
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