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Jesus

Born to a virgin in some hay In a manger He did lay This babe that came was heaven sent He'd pay sins cost so we'd repent Angels sang were he did stay Born to a virgin in some hay His life was spent with the masses To show His love non surpasses He gave His all so we could be In His family for eternity Born to a virgin in some hay Among the animals He did lay He paid sins price upon the cross His blood He shed for us, the lost From death to life to show the way Born to a virgin in some hay

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Date: 12/12/2016 3:16:00 PM
Hi Charles! Just wanted to let you know I really like this little poem. But, I have some suggestions for you which would make it even better I think. So, if you're interested email me and I'll email them back to you. I really love helping other poets. Carole
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Charles Reese
Date: 1/8/2017 11:39:00 PM
I'm glad you like this little poem Carol. I'm always open to constructive criticism, it's how we get better, so what do you have in mind?

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