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Jasmine

wishful petals bloom dance upon my memories soothing scents of you

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Simone Segal

Date: 11/7/2009 10:36:00 AM

Sweet Haiku! my son is also Jimbo! thank you for your comment, love Simone

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/3/2009 4:53:00 PM

hmmm I want a different word line 3? first word? something with more sweetness? Light & Love

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/28/2009 2:45:00 PM

Odoriferous romance you wrote here Goff. SWEEEET!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2009 4:17:00 PM

Like the Haiku. That Jasmine has a lovely scent. Keep writing. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 10/6/2009 11:39:00 PM

Always a lovely aroma to your poetry Jim.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome blog comments today

John Freeman

Date: 10/5/2009 8:12:00 AM

She must have been pure James, that's what I read in your Haiku, as the wishful petals bloom. Smile. Sincerely, Moses Thanks for the congrats.

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/4/2009 4:43:00 PM

Simply lovely with a touch of enchantment! Excellent poetry! Love, Robin

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/4/2009 10:09:00 AM

romantic, lovely

Donna Golden

Date: 10/3/2009 10:02:00 PM

This is wonderfully romantic, Jim! Lovely. Donna

Karla Null

Date: 10/3/2009 6:15:00 PM

Um, I love jasmine, I can smell it now just by reading your Haiku....Karla

Moonbee Canady

Date: 10/3/2009 3:28:00 PM

Jimbo ... that is such a romantic memory... Very Sensual for Jasmine (smile) Loved It MoonBee

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/3/2009 12:19:00 PM

And a lovely scent is is! Beautiful description that evokes nostalgia and serenity, Jim. Aces again! Love you, carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/3/2009 7:45:00 AM

This is beautiful, James. Wistful, filled with melancholy and sweet! ~ love, Carrie

P Sheart

Date: 10/3/2009 6:44:00 AM

A beautiful Haiku James, you've out done yourself! Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend. Love Light Truth Patricia

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/3/2009 2:28:00 AM

what a beauty,so romantic,sweet nostalgia flows here,to my favs Jim--ery talented-Charma

Brian Strand

Date: 10/3/2009 12:20:00 AM

Lovely aromatic words Jim.thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/3/2009 12:09:00 AM

Beautiful work JMG, this speaks volumes...Raul

Geoffery Mchugh

Date: 10/2/2009 11:44:00 PM

Inspiring read.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 10/2/2009 11:42:00 PM

Nice Haiku, James. She must have been a beauty to be remebered by you. Thank you for your comment on my "Hunted". You understand me...