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January's Touch

northern freezing hell firework on resolutions big round rivers fete beginning and end of garnet year memories fresh carnations dreams (c)Olive Eloisa May 13, 2015 9:33 pm Sponsor SKAT A Contest Name Two Haiku (Month of January) 8th place.. :)

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Date: 6/10/2014 4:09:00 PM
One more time, thank you for the replies.... hugs
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Date: 6/10/2014 4:09:00 PM
Glad to see you smiling always...Linda
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Date: 6/8/2014 11:49:00 PM
Congratulations :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:42:00 PM
Thank you.. :)
Date: 6/8/2014 11:43:00 PM
Wonderful haikus Olive,, loved the first one n more so the second ,,, congrats on great win dear !
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:41:00 PM
Thank Dr. Upma.. :) GBU
Date: 6/8/2014 5:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Linda
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:41:00 PM
Thanks:) ,, olive eloisa
Date: 6/8/2014 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations Olive_eloi :) Enjoyed both haiku, but slightly prefer the 2nd to the first. I love carnations with perfume...even in dreams. // paul
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Date: 6/8/2014 12:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win Olive...
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Date: 6/8/2014 10:48:00 AM
It's a freezing hell all right!!! I especially loved the beautiful carnations you added into this one at the end. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 6/8/2014 9:46:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Olive
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Date: 6/8/2014 8:37:00 AM
OLIVE, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:39:00 PM
most welcome Skat. :)
Date: 5/22/2014 10:47:00 AM
thank you for the comment on my comment
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:38:00 PM
:)
Date: 5/15/2014 10:07:00 PM
Wow "freezing hell in north" You just know when you start like that, this will be a GREAT poem!!!!!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/16/2014 12:22:00 AM
wehehehehew it must e or else Arthur hahahha... :D
Date: 5/14/2014 12:05:00 PM
Olive, that's how it is down here where I'm at... enjoyed this small write.. Linda
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/22/2014 9:38:00 AM
Thaks much Linda..:)
Date: 5/14/2014 7:31:00 AM
yes, that last line is something special :-)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/21/2014 12:35:00 PM
Thanks much..:)
Date: 5/14/2014 6:48:00 AM
Very nice haiku ..love the "fresh carnation dreams"...
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/14/2014 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Joseph..:) I appreciate you drop by..:)
Date: 5/13/2014 1:49:00 PM
great imagery.. love it!!! :O)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/13/2014 5:21:00 PM
Thanks much Aiyah..:) Gbu
Date: 5/13/2014 1:43:00 PM
Beautiful imagery - love it!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/14/2014 5:24:00 AM
Thanks much for the read.. ;) GBU

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