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January Rain -Sf-

~Blooming Tale~ In limbo, we crawl on walls Stare into a world behind curtains Puzzled by the ends of -October dreams A fight to scream, no one remembers Once December is gone Dark illuminating stars Will carve magic notes on trees January comes to life! Ones the old resolutions end Mortal mountains ready To Bloom Taking from the clouds of yesterday Surrender to the ascending view Never to gloom again........ The winds of a thousand words form a new scent A Flower- -A new year begins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/24/2013 12:43:00 AM
My belated biggest congratulations on your awesome win my dearest sis and BFF! Biggest hugs! I'm so glad that I saw this one w/c I haven't read yet before. Got more time at soup today.:))))Your poem is so inspiring exuding great hope my dearest sis! Magnificent! So love the image giving great life. Adoring & loving this soooo much! How I wish I can write free verse soon-the most difficult for me. Again, thanks a million for sharing & everything. Tcare! Sending hugs & smiles! lovem4evrLeo
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Date: 11/19/2013 5:22:00 PM
PD, your poem is full of energy and life. Love the content and vivid imagery. Congrats on the well deserved win :)
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Date: 11/19/2013 6:57:00 AM
There she is. Nice win Linda. Now keep on writing.
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Date: 11/18/2013 7:03:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, for the awesome win...PD
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Date: 11/18/2013 12:41:00 PM
congrats on a great win Linda
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Date: 11/18/2013 7:41:00 AM
Stunning images! This one is a well deserved win. Congrats
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Date: 11/18/2013 7:07:00 AM
I admire the freedom and abandon with which you write, pd, love those stars carving magic notes on trees! for me, this is one of the best ones on the list - congrats! :)
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:55:00 PM
enchanting me no end with your kind of january mood,PD... big cheers to you for a fine win..:) huggs
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Date: 11/17/2013 10:34:00 PM
January rain magic in an enchanting poem! Ah the wording deserves d win. Many many congrats. Fondest tnx 4 d Hm.:)
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Date: 11/17/2013 8:00:00 PM
I think this is an exceptional piece, one of my personal favorites for the contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/17/2013 6:10:00 PM
well, lookie there, it's a poem by PD. I didn't remember this one. But you were very smart to post one that is you at your VERY best. Congrats in my SF contest!!
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Date: 8/19/2013 1:55:00 PM
Hello, Your poem has good imagery, it cries out frustration. Good poem. Linda x
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Date: 6/15/2012 10:02:00 PM
GOOD WORK!!!
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:13:00 PM
You seem to be really developing as a poet! Good job on having huge traffic on your poems!
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:22:00 PM
Thank you for your poems and dedication! I offer to you our love and appreciation! JP
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Date: 12/26/2011 12:35:00 AM
trapped within the self of me, a chance 2 find serendipity?
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Date: 12/23/2011 6:36:00 AM
no no no no no no baby not me. that sounds like a jail cell. john
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Date: 12/22/2011 8:36:00 AM
This is very deep and profound Poet. I like that kind of poetry. I invite you to read my Footstep poem. Thank you for my placement in your In The Mood Contest. The poem about my father was very meaningful to me and I was so hurt that it was trashed in the contest it was originally written for so you have made me very happy today. Also I am working on my poem for your new contest. Thank you for assigning to me such a wonderful poet.
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Date: 12/15/2011 8:05:00 AM
Love this pd!! I am doing good thanks.. How are things on your side?? :) *hugs*
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Date: 12/14/2011 8:19:00 PM
I don't think I ever congratulated you on this win,Irma. Just going thru some older winners' list and saw your awesome win here. I think this is one of your best ever! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/10/2011 8:41:00 AM
Loved this . Declan xx
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Date: 12/10/2011 3:01:00 AM
PD. Know how this feels ,think I'm there now .good luck in Brian's contest. Anne
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Date: 12/9/2011 11:04:00 PM
Irma, I am getting off here now. I saw you visiting some of the same poets I was seeing and thought i"d tell you good night! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/9/2011 8:26:00 AM
First things first, Congrats on your win!! 2nd I'm loving the contest you mentioned in my blog... sounds like fun... Hit me up whenever your ready... long hugs all day to you hun.... xoox Michael
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Date: 12/8/2011 3:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win, PD! Interesting write. Kim
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