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Janky Boots

Janky boots, walk me through this poverty painted stream While water laughs its way through my busted seam My feet are cold and unprotected But I still walk to my next taste of your nostalgic sunbeam

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/26/2017 1:06:00 PM
Hello Jenny, the term rubayiat is the plural of Rubai. Yours is a single rubai. Also, a Rubai should be spiritual ormystical rather than secular and worldly... Pashang
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Date: 10/27/2016 2:50:00 PM
Very good.... Skat...
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Date: 10/25/2016 2:54:00 PM
Flourishing Flow***pd
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Date: 10/21/2016 3:06:00 AM
Tempting Janky Boots of the Fancy`s Fairy who runs barefooted in the grass of the dawns...As you met and embraced her...Best wishes
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