Jaded Love

Jaded love, deepened wound weeps Theater dark, actors vanish No encore no ovation Flowers lay dying...

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James Fraser

Date: 4/18/2011 11:07:00 AM

This poem feels as if it was written for me. Wonderful poetry Sharon....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/4/2011 1:09:00 PM

Your poem gave me chills, Sharon. There is nothing more painful than a love that has become jaded. Wonderful work, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/3/2011 1:59:00 PM

I absolutly love this!!! your are a true poet my dear...luv Michael

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/3/2011 12:30:00 PM

smile -- just another fave within your radiant and growing collection my dear, precious Sharon -- love, christopher ~

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/3/2011 12:29:00 PM

smile -- intensely felt moment presented from the wonderous theatre of a very beautiful lady and priceless Soul -- one can envision a few different images behind this bluegrayblack canvas' colours my dear, although, never, could i imagine someone as lovely as yourself, ever standing upon this curtains drawn stage with even a single petal from, your fragrant beauty as that of a rose, fading, withering, or dying away -- cont:)

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/3/2011 11:08:00 AM

gee Sharon you could have put this on yesterday when my contest was still open....sheesh, again it's beautiful