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Jack Frost

January will arrive with Jack Frost by her side. As expected, we will feel their presence far and wide. Coming with their entourage will be the ice and snow. Keeping warm gets harder when they make their cold winds blow. Frozen ponds and icicles add to the winter scene. Racing through, this couple can be volatile and mean. Often January and her mate will change their ways. Suddenly they may, in mercy, grant some pleasant days. Then comes February's turn; they know they cannot stay. posted November 30, 2015 entered in Brian Strand's Contest 246 (any topic or form, 12-line max) on December 7, 2016

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Date: 12/12/2015 3:07:00 PM
JANICE, Congratulations on your Jack Frost Acrostic. Love SKAT
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/12/2015 10:17:00 PM
Thank you, SKAT. Janice
Date: 12/11/2015 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/11/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thanks, Nayda! Janice
Date: 12/9/2015 9:45:00 PM
Wonderful acrostic Janice.. congrats on great win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/9/2015 9:53:00 PM
Thank you, Upma. Janice
Date: 12/9/2015 4:27:00 PM
Kinda like Bonnie and Clyde roaring through the countryside.....Well done Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/9/2015 4:40:00 PM
Thanks, John. Good comparison! Janice
Date: 12/9/2015 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Janice!
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Date: 12/9/2015 9:06:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/9/2015 12:53:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Janice
Date: 12/1/2015 9:54:00 AM
Perfect!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/1/2015 10:13:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 12/1/2015 9:16:00 AM
May I make a small suggestion? Put a line break after line four. That way Jack and frost will be separated. I really enjoyed the poem!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/1/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. I think you're right and will follow that suggestion. Janice
Date: 11/30/2015 1:39:00 PM
lovely winter imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/30/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan. Janice

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