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Jack and Jill

An old gal known to us all as Jill Who lived in an old house on a hill Going out for a stroll Ended up in a roll With jack at the bottom of the still Written: June 2nd, 2014 For Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy Contest

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Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 8/23/2014 2:52:00 PM

Clever!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/21/2014 11:14:00 AM

Had me smiling with this cute one. love phyl

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/17/2014 9:26:00 AM

This is hilarious my dear Elaine. Congrats on your fine win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2014 12:03:00 AM

Hi, Elaine, , :)Congratulations on your win. "Linda"

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/10/2014 1:04:00 PM

Hilarious! I bet old Jack got her drunk and took advantage huh? I may have to have a word with him...Congrats my friend - Tim

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 6/17/2014 9:22:00 AM

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2014 6:04:00 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara

Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 6:46:00 PM

Thank you Sara, for your kind comments. Elaine

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/9/2014 5:15:00 PM

Dear Lainie, This is very funny! Love the way you put the "still" in there. Very clever. Congratulations, dear! Love, carolyn

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/9/2014 7:28:00 AM

ha ha like this funny limerick Elaine congrats on win hugs

Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:57:00 AM

Thank you Shadow, It was a fun contest. bfn Elaine

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/8/2014 8:27:00 AM

Clever one, congrats.

Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:57:00 AM

thank you Richard, Yes! I am not very good at writing Limericks, but this one was fun. Elaine

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 7:31:00 AM

Elaine, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~

Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:55:00 AM

Thank you, Skat. It was a fun contest. bfn Elaine

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/7/2014 9:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, Elaine

Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:55:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram. It was fun contest. bfn Elaine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2014 9:44:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Elaine. AWesome to see you on the list.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/7/2014 8:02:00 PM

hmmmm naughty JACK! Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:54:00 AM

Hi Deb, Thanks. bfn Lainie

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/7/2014 7:36:00 PM

Clever Elaine, a fun limerick, grats on the win :)

Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:53:00 AM

Thank you Casarah. bfn Elaine

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/7/2014 6:11:00 PM

HeHeHeHe:-) very witty write - Bravo on your great win!

Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:52:00 AM

Thank you Pandiata. Yes! Being an old gal myself, I thought it was funny too. lol! bfn Elaine

Paul Callus

Date: 6/5/2014 4:29:00 AM

Love the humour! gl in contest! // paul

Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Paul, I just couldn't resist this one. Elaine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2014 3:38:00 PM

haha, I love how you ended them up at a still!!!

Elaine George
Date: 6/9/2014 10:50:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I am not very good at writing Limerick's, but I had fun with this one. bfn Lainie

Kira Price

Date: 6/2/2014 8:01:00 PM

Exactly how it happened :-) nice

Elaine George
Date: 6/4/2014 6:33:00 AM

Thank you for reading and your comments, Kira. bfn Lainie