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Jack and Jill

My Mom read me nursery rhymes as in her womb I slept and in my dreams they come alive in color and in depth My dreams begin with Jack and Jill as down the hill he takes a spill then I dream of Miss Muffet scaring a spider from his web and tuffet I even saw Mary and her little lamb as she pushed him in a pram And in the fullness of the moon I dream of dishes dancing with a spoons But the best dream of all is that of being born and looking into the loving eyes of Mom while Dad and sis lovingly look on (2)

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Date: 10/17/2012 7:09:00 PM
Oh,this is very wonderful my dear Joseph May. I love it! My big congratulations on your win! hugs:)LG
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Date: 10/16/2012 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2012 11:55:00 AM
Many congrats Joseph on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/15/2012 11:12:00 AM
Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 10/14/2012 8:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Joseph. I like your poem...Hugs! **Maria**
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:43:00 PM
Yes, a picture of love. well written, congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:31:00 PM
JOSEPH, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD
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Date: 10/14/2012 4:11:00 PM
CONGRATS JOSEPH ON AN INCREDIBLE WRITE AND PERFECT WIN FOR THIS RARE BEAUTY LUV..
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Joseph May
Date: 10/14/2012 5:54:00 PM
thank you Linda
Date: 10/13/2012 1:37:00 AM
HIghly imaginative, Joseph, and I sure enjoyed the references to those nursery rhymes I too grew up with!!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/14/2012 5:55:00 PM
thanks Andrea
Date: 10/11/2012 10:00:00 AM
i really like this. Great job!!!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/14/2012 5:54:00 PM
thanks Aprol
Date: 10/11/2012 7:02:00 AM
Lovely Joseph, the same theme as my last poem. - like it a lot.- (My child is born - and it is not for the contest.) - If yours is for contest, I wish you luck. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 10/11/2012 8:07:00 AM
thank you Anne
Date: 10/11/2012 6:20:00 AM
I like this verse Joseph, the way you used the nursery rhymes
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Joseph May
Date: 10/11/2012 6:33:00 AM
thank you Hazel...I appreciate your comments

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