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ive been brave enough

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ive been brave enough

ive been brave enough
to face the fight
to hurt me like this
you had no right

all i ever did was care for you
now i hear from your friends 
that to me you were not true

now with empty arms
and a heart filled with deep pain
please GOD take away
the memory of where he,s lain

how could he leave like that 
like i was nothing but a friend
i guess i,ll never really know
why it had to end

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  1. Date: 2/13/2011 7:22:00 PM
    Not a bad write with simple wording making this rather easy to read and understand. Your rhyming was not bad either.