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It's Over:

Blow out your wind swept mind, Your heart is a festival of times, Come closer, if you don't decline, You just don't know what you'll find. I told you I loved you, but I lied, Amongst other things I would say to you, Just to keep you happy I gave you a ring. Thirteen years later you were standing at the door, But I wouldn't open it like I did before. Started sleeping in separate rooms, Honey, this ain't love, this is war. /|\

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/14/2016 7:18:00 PM
Wow! Rick you blew the doors off w/this stay out of my way, or there will be hell to pay poem. True grit w/one. Going in the fave for sure, pal. Loved that last line, it a deal clincher. Great write, my Aussie friend. Love always.
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Date: 11/14/2016 8:12:00 PM
Thanks, RW. I've been a bit slack of late, haven't been on the soup for a couple of days! Will have to catch up now, though, your mate /|\
Date: 9/28/2016 2:24:00 AM
Sad write Rick, but well done! Regards, Craig
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Date: 9/28/2016 2:29:00 AM
Nothing to be sad about, only memories remain now. And thanks

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