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It's Not Easy Being Me

It's not easy being me The little scared Brown eyed girl Of which I am I cry in a silent way I'm funny in my own say I'll love you till I die Even if you make me cry Even if she's Trapped in me I'll always hear Her silent screams It's not easy being me The silly little Brown haired girl Of which I am Even if nature Takes her away I'll always be The scared little girl It's not easy being me For though I am the Silly, little scared brown Eyed and brown haired girl

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Laura Hay

Date: 3/16/2018 11:43:00 AM

I like the way you have separated yourself to being me and the little brown eyed girl, very well written. Warm regards, Laura.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/2/2018 8:57:00 PM

Lovely haunting poem, Gizelle,. I love it. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/28/2018 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations Gizelle, well done...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/28/2018 9:30:00 AM

Such a wistful penning Gizelle, lovely read, congratulations on your win :) xomo

Lewis Raynes

Date: 2/27/2018 8:53:00 PM

Congratulations on ur win here Gizelle, i love the simple honesty and interpretation of depression , great write :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/27/2018 8:50:00 PM

Nicely done Gizelle, congratulations on your win!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/27/2018 8:14:00 PM

Gizelle, CONGRATULATIONS on your win. Janice

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/27/2018 8:13:00 PM

Gizelle, CONGRATULATIONS on your win. Janice

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/10/2014 5:49:00 AM

Thanks Gizelle for sharing your heart in this beautiful piece, well done indeed and look forward to reading more of your material. Are you South African?, I've lovely memories of the garden route on holiday in your beautiful country, by the vway I'm in Scotland. God bless you, Gordon

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 7:33:00 AM

Gizelle,, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2014 7:03:00 AM

A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Gizelle

Skat A

Date: 5/30/2014 11:34:00 PM

Gizelle,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/30/2014 3:43:00 PM

Welcome to PoetrySoup, Gizelle. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/29/2014 12:46:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Gizelle :) - I choose your first written poem - Moving !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Palmer

Date: 5/29/2014 11:30:00 AM

nice write Gizelle

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2014 9:08:00 AM

I imagine only you know how it feels to be you, Gizelle, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Gizelle Maritz
Date: 5/29/2014 11:00:00 AM

Thanx Linda* I will most definitely write again. I do have a lot of poems to post, some in afrikaans lol but I guess it's only english poems that are allowed?