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It's My Birthday For Debbie Guzzi

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It's My Birthday For Debbie Guzzi

Early this Morning, I was sleeping in my bed. I heard a noise outside my window. I got out of bed half asleep, I walked to the window and looked outside. I saw a lot of little birds flying and carrying on. They soon seperated in bunches - as if they were having a meeting. Then they grouped all together. They were making a lot of noise. One of them came to the window. I asked him - what was going on. He answered - don't you know? Today is Debbie's Birthday and we have to celebrate. I won't tell you how old she is, but today, she becomes wiser. The Angels in heaven are very happy and her family is too- that she made it to this day. We all hope and pray that she will always be as sweet and beautiful as she is today. The little birds left flying and they went to spread the news - that today is your Birthday and we have to celebrate. Happy Birthday Debbie...
09/21/ 2012 writtin by Lucilla M. Carrillo For contest

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  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:50:00 PM
    LUCY,, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:39:00 PM
    I remember this one. Congrats. WE are all winners with Debs' list!!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Lucilla. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:18:00 AM
    Congratulations Lucilla xx

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:52:00 PM

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 5:04:00 PM
    Oh I love the way you wrote this little bite of a celebration for Debbie,,, you have a blessed day Lucilla ;}

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 10:08:00 AM
    Wow!!! So sweet and wonderful poem for a birthday celebrity! I love it!! I am pretty sure Debs will love your poem too! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 10:10:00 AM
    lovely this is Lucilla,,

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 12:55:00 PM
    ahhh, that is so sweet!!! Sure Debs will enjoy this. I like the idea of those birds and when you said she became "wiser" Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 9:00:00 AM
    a sweet offering for Debbie which she will so enjoy .. a precious tribute Lucilla.. winning wishes to u .. thankxx for blessings for our new baby .. he is adorable luv ..

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 8:36:00 AM
    Very sweet birthdays poems to Debbie, good luck in contest hope you will win Lucilla. Have a wonderful Sunday. - Love oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 8:07:00 AM
    A little birdie told me today is Debbie's birthday. Looks like a good write.

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 7:50:00 AM
    A beautiful dedication to one of Soups best Poets.... LOve it

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 5:31:00 AM
    So sweet of you! As of yesterday night it was the poem..with NO poem on it that got to the must delete & resubmitt hon Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 2:05:00 AM
    Happy birthday Debbie. Lovely poem with beautiful verses. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 9:58:00 PM
    cool entry! good job

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 7:39:00 PM
    What a lovely birthday poem for Debbie. I don't know her but wish her a happy birthday for me too.