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Its Just a Feeling

It seems no matter where I go You are my constant shadow You've been in my heart And you've worn down my soul I found you on my doorstep one day like an hungry stray cat, you kept coming back You've made me weak yet stronger too I know where I've been I don't need you I'll sing a favorite Beatles tune let you go like a big red balloon You need to join the marching band I don't wanna hold your hand Our time together is at an end You've been a most unwelcome friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/15/2014 9:39:00 AM
Brilliant write.Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, karen
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Date: 3/11/2014 10:19:00 AM
Karen, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:30:00 AM
What a treatise on facing one's demons, assesing them, and discharging them forthwith. I am envious of the air of strength you possess especially in the last verse. Thank you for sharing your experience. It inspires me to mimick your efforts in dealing with my own demons. Remember, pain shared is pain diminished... Scott
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Date: 10/21/2009 11:34:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading you splendid poetry today. Thank you for sharing it Karen. Love, Carol
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