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Its Hard To Stay Apart

whn my eys got stuck on u for frst tym... d whole world has become so full of lyf n i ws fine... dn u hv ur eys on me n it makes dt more real... n i ws sucked by downbeat of people hearin of ds deal.... i ws getin crystld by ur aura n pictures... i ws chkd by evry drama dt ws held for me to cut it.. i knw dt people wl laugh at me to c al dese apertures.. its hard to stay apart frm u whn i hv to admit it... around d waves u hv made me laugh hard n to cherish.. i ws star strucked by ur persona ...which hlpd me to escape.. i cnt frgt dt tym whn u hv said my aura a home n make me clownish.. i ws cryin hard inside as i ws scared by our relation drape.. dn i hv choosen to remain stay apart frm u lyk a gesture.. n also whn i heard dt u hv been taken by odr girl.. its just hv pushd me towrds my aim bt wid more bravure.. i ws standing alone facing wrld wid my senses birl.. aftr a long tym whn v saw each odr facing badlucks.. i ws drntchd by d situations n laughin at our destiny.. nw v r standin lyk an individuals n history just shucks... nw v r enjyin d peace alone n waitin for other scrunity... love pari if u likd d poem or if didnt ...just put ur input wid cmnts....i wud love to observe dt..

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Date: 12/24/2013 7:32:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Merry, Merry Christmas To You And Your Family!!! Sara
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 1/8/2014 10:57:00 AM
merry christmas sara...n a vry happy new year...n ya thanx a lot :) :)
Date: 12/20/2013 4:15:00 AM
Fine Parivartana on parivartana of language, Congrats on the win, Namaste
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 1/8/2014 10:56:00 AM
namaste sir...thanx a lot :) :)
Date: 12/19/2013 8:54:00 PM
Parivartana, , Congratulations on your awesome win... always~ LINDA
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 1/8/2014 10:53:00 AM
thanx linda... :) :)
Date: 12/19/2013 6:40:00 PM
The whole world becomes full of life when your eyes met for the first time...very romantic....a beautiful poem...congratulations on this win...
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 1/8/2014 10:52:00 AM
thanx donna ... keep postin :) :)
Date: 12/19/2013 12:07:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Parivartana in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 1/8/2014 10:51:00 AM
thanx dear ...:) :)
Date: 12/19/2013 10:16:00 AM
Congrats P. S!
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 1/8/2014 10:50:00 AM
thanks a lot :) :)
Date: 11/20/2013 2:40:00 PM
Very intresting use of language, it made me have to pay attention to what you were saying. I have to admit I liked it a lot. It felt very organic and sexy at the same time.
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 11/22/2013 11:40:00 AM
Thanku richard for ds :) :)..

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