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Its a Thrill

Every time I go to the place we know I get sad inside and i want to hide when i think of you and the things you do I want to run away break down and cry And Its a thrill But it kills and we're still not anywhere and i know that we're not going soon but i don't care. BY: Ava Douglass Age: 12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/27/2016 2:10:00 PM
AVA, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT -
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Date: 1/26/2010 4:34:00 PM
Wonderful writing here, Ava and I look forward to reading lots more from you!! Thanks so much for reaching out to comment on others writing too and Welcome to PoetrySoup ... hope you have lots of fun here!!
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Date: 1/17/2010 7:45:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue your creative writings to share with all of us.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/17/2010 12:23:00 PM
As i was writing this one I made it into a song! I LOVE SINGIGING!!!!!
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Date: 1/17/2010 12:18:00 PM
THANKYOU¬!
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Date: 1/17/2010 6:33:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ava. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2010 5:55:00 AM
In every life there is some loneliness and sadness but these times make us strong. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/17/2010 4:20:00 AM
Ava, this is a very nice write and I can feel the sincerity and emotions pouring out in this poem. Well done, stay encouraged and continue to grow in your writing.
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