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It's a Lie

His eyes dilated and I saw beads of sweat gather on the tip of his nose. His jawline was clenched and his fingers were fidgeting. Did I say something wrong? What have I done? I love this man. With one swing I was floating, my back greeted the floor. I smelt the rubber of his shoe. as it met my jaw, and I felt it, as it blacked my stomach. Did I say something wrong? What have I done? I love this man but, it’s a lie. He will do it again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/13/2016 11:51:00 PM
Hi Allison, Wow, powerful, intense imagery. I hope this didn't actually happen to you, but it sounds so real. Either way, you are a budding poetic talent, so put your energies there and run the opposite direction from creeps like that guy. Plenty of other sources of inspiration out there. Cheers, Brian
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Allison Schumacher
Date: 3/19/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/8/2016 11:09:00 PM
A wonderfully apt and emotionally moving description of an abusive relationship.
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Date: 3/8/2016 5:13:00 PM
Its a 10 for me rating this, short n great poem. Good one
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Allison Schumacher
Date: 3/19/2016 8:29:00 PM
Thanks so much!!
Date: 3/8/2016 10:57:00 AM
Beautiful poem Allison. I imagining that
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Date: 2/29/2016 9:45:00 AM
As per a new poet here, I decided to go for your best poems and I must say that this one left me flabbergasted! You are a gem, a star and a potential mega duper souper! Keep on writing friend and you are highly welcome to PS... A definite 7
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:41:00 PM
Congrats Allison, but I pray this is not your experience or that of anyone you love......Domestic violence is scary especially if the perp is a spouse or a partner.
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Date: 2/16/2016 12:46:00 AM
Wonderful write Allison.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/15/2016 10:10:00 PM
Hi Allison, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 2/15/2016 9:32:00 AM
Excellently done about the instinct. Congrats on your win my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 2/14/2016 11:38:00 PM
Wonderful! Allison you are gifted. How wonderfully you made the poem to reach climax. Welcome to Poetry Soup and a Big Congratulation on your win. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/14/2016 3:55:00 PM
Allison, Congratulation on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Its a lie" if you'd like. I hope you are enjoying your day. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Allison Schumacher
Date: 2/14/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/13/2016 11:25:00 PM
Allison, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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