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It Wont Come True

The wishes are right and the dreams steady but it wont come true not even bettys no one knows or can even feel me pain it hurts so bad and u left me in da rain A place called reality called me yesterday and asked me to live it each n every day i anwsered it with a simple yes and didnt pay it no mind because im living life a dream and its all on my time A time to laugh and a time to weep Sounds like so much of a funeral to me i feel so alone and no one to turn to i guess im all wrong cus none of it Wont Come True!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/24/2009 5:04:00 PM
Kind of downbeat. Well wriitten and clever use of language which seems to mark all of your writing. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/19/2009 9:40:00 AM
Very emotional piece. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. ~Des Juan
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