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It Was War Blood and Gore

It was war Blood and gore One by one they lined up and took their designated places They stood across from one another with their war faces. Battles are dark I wear the mark The General yelled for ammunition Loaded and released without hesitation His aim is sure But less than pure The wounded are removed from the field Both sides are determined and neither yield Young Teenage boys Playing with toys One side will win this hard fought battle Bodies will fall and treated like cattle Children maimed No one blamed The winners get one point for their effort But both teams leave covered in dirt Except for one youngster Decides he's no soldier Even in the worse of instincts lays hope Not everyman smokes violence like dope Our folly continues With few breakthroughs Playing high school football can be futile So many young boys lie on a broken pile That is the crime Cut in their prime One boy will be forever called wimp As he bravely leaves with a life long limp Just like war Blood and gore

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Date: 1/9/2015 9:34:00 PM
hmmm, am I wrong, Armand? but isn't this about football players? I see everyone commenting on it being a poem about war, but to me you are describing the football field as the battlefield. most interesting poem! I detest that stupid sport that is the number one sport of Americans. It SUCKS. This was a good one to find tonight. I keep trying to go up your page two of poems, but as you post new ones, I am always left on the bottom of page 2! one day soon I will have read them ALL.
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Date: 11/18/2014 9:35:00 AM
a most powerful write which doubles as a meaningful reminder to the young generation to love peace, not war, Maurice.. I missed you in my last contest; hugggs!
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Date: 9/2/2014 12:18:00 AM
War is the game of the rich and our young women and men are the pieces they play with. A good write my friend.
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Date: 9/1/2014 4:28:00 PM
Powerful in War, what for. Wonderful poetry Maurice, full of the images of War - James....
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Date: 9/1/2014 4:41:00 PM
Thank you James. I appreciate the support.

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