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It Makes Me Free

I love to see people draw art, it makes me feel so apart, from the world that keeps me away, from what i want to be someday. it makes me feel free. To see the grass grow, and the ocean flow, and the kids throw a baseball on a hot summer day. it makes me feel free. To see teenager's help out, and seeing kids play about, to see people in a home, Once poor and alone, God made it to be no more. Seeing men and wemon fighting in the war, Watching kids take a tour for college, hearing a chior soar. seeing men and women come home frm the cold war, Those things make me feel free!

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Date: 5/26/2012 8:48:00 PM
Shayla,;-) congratulations with your featured poem of the week... it was nice stopping by to view all the great poems, on the home page.... always... pd
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Date: 5/24/2012 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Shayla. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2009 5:33:00 PM
Sounds as tho thru you pen's flow, your heart is free to be and create by your words flow. Seem as tho you are new, so I welcome you to poetry soup. Now here is the scoop, if you need any help, just ask anyone, they will be glad to help. Sincere, Love, Moses
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Date: 11/23/2009 8:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shayla. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2009 1:34:00 PM
Enlightening poem Shayla, beautifully written >> James
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