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It Looks Better In a Rhyme

It looks better as a rhyme Putting thoughts into sing-song It’s nice like a wind chime It’s a melody you’ll sing long It looks better as a rhyme Pairing ideas and words that sound good Sometimes they’re loud like a crime Or quiet like a mime Sour like a lime If you have the time Know that it looks better put into rhyme

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Date: 4/30/2010 9:26:00 AM
Sometimes we can just slip one over on people with the rhyme...keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for your time commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 4/28/2010 9:04:00 AM
very nice i'll say it twice loved it faleshia
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