It Is Written

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~It Is Written~ (Rhyme) As I begun one day my poems to write Excitement in my soul built up Constructing every sentence was a pleasure This clearly to my heart delight Tension with exhilaration mounts too With every word I need another one to find Words in my mind with extreme heat I pursue Little by little from my soul they begin to unwind With unspeakable joy I make them fit and then score As thoughts from my brain flash and unraveled right Bringing better words than they were before Again to possess them with exact words I write My soul from above ascends with all this divined joy Than with pleasure from writing my verses I still enjoy. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2004 September.14.2015

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/21/2015 10:03:00 PM

Love this poets write about poetry writing. Aptly describes my feelings when composing most of my poetry except when I write the dark stuff.. Great poem. A7

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/2/2015 6:08:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Robert,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem. I do appreciate your visit,your very kind comments, the 7 and all so very much.I'm so glad you liked this one:) I'll visit your page very soon.Thanks again for everything!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light, God bless you!:)D.

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/15/2015 2:32:00 PM

What a beautiful expression of the process of writing, Dorian! You do have a gift for words :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/15/2015 7:15:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Laura,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem. I do appreciate your visit, and your very kind comment very much.You're very kind!!I'll visit you very soon:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light, God bless you!:)D.

Kevin Leake

Date: 9/14/2015 3:17:00 AM

Great write Dorian, I especially enjoyed the piece about finding new words everyday!!! Best Wishes Kevin

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/14/2015 1:59:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Kevin,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit very much.Best to you too!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.