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Island of Fantasy

Island of Fantasy She sits an island of fantasy amid the breakage of the past adrift in altered visions wishfully meandering manic melancholy Windblown debris masquerades as fluttering birds church towers howl mimics distant train whistle scrape of swinging metal gate becomes gleeful shriek of children scuffling footfalls in the shadows a lover's coming home Cool touch of evening rain cold end to fantasy she rises leaves her island shuffles over broken time to sit on the edge of reality. 6/10/2016 submitted to – Island of Fantasy – Poetry Contest sponsor – Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 6/13/2016 9:45:00 AM
Great capture! A bit too close to home for my liking...I have that fantasy skill set LOL LOVE " to sit on the edge of reality"
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Date: 6/10/2016 10:56:00 PM
A most different and impressive approach. I really enjoyed it ... CayCay
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John Lawless
Date: 6/11/2016 6:27:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, I believe we all have these "sanctuaries" to which we retreat to reflect and remember. Appreciate your interest and comment

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