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Is It Really What You Want

Freedom is a feeling Like no one or thing can hold you back The wind in your hair The water at your feet. Freedom. We all want it. Freedom is an idea Something no one or thing can steal from you The things you can do The people you would meet. Freedom. We all want it Freedom is a state of mind. You can always be right You can always be wrong Freedom. We all want it. Freedom is harmony Your feelings are equalized Your thoughts are to Freedom. We all want it But even with freedom Your still a captive. Of your soul, Of your spirit Of yourself. Freedom can be a prison Freedom Is it really what you want?

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Date: 2/27/2012 9:52:00 PM
I loved how you found ways to describe freedom and than at the end changed it and turned it. it is a beautiful concept and written so well. -JenniKatherine
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