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© G. V., 11-11-2013, All Rights Reserved (Revised)
© G. V., 05-29-2013, All Rights Reserved

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Thy sightly, blooming charm, gents' thoughts enthralled,
and attar's scent, their wonderment inflamed,
revealing and contoured thy dressing mould,
transformed their sentiments to status maimed!

The short, designer-made and bold tight skirts,
thy geodetic curves embraced like gloves,
where insolent, male feelings, made for birds,
provoked thine ardour and my savage shoves.

Thou courted wert, by the surrounding plebe,
that dull and raw, with amateurish flair,
undaunted forged inventiveness, and dweeb
they lionhearted tried to kiss your hair.

Disdained, the suitors though, exclaimed defeat,
thy beau's wrath proved their charming obsolete.

© 11-11-2013, G.V., All Rights Reserved
(sonnet, humor)

(Hmm... Don't let my smile cozen you. I am still very angry!)

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  1. Date: 11/22/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Interesting work penned..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the honor of being placed in your favs..Your visits were encouraging..Sara

  1. Date: 11/13/2013 4:14:00 PM
    If this is how you get angry..I love it : ) 'The lionhearted tried to kiss her hair ' : ) Very charming..Excellent entry.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Giorgio!! In the midst of the madding crowd with your wits about you!! LOL

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 8:29:00 PM
    Love it even more, when you are still holding in a bit of fire!!! the postscript makes it even better !!! Simmering!

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 11:24:00 AM
    blazing read, G... you are on fire of anger.. absolutely wonderfullll!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:48:00 AM
    Oooh. Great one. Enjoyed reading! Thanks for sharing. Perfect sonnet. Love the fire. Always, Laura