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Inviting a Cold Season

When the chilly weather arrives to northern zones: feel its frigidity slowly enter the tiny pores of your skin, and penetrate your unprepared and shivering bones... snow may be coming soon, even before the jolly Christmastime; and if snowflakes is what you crave, hear those silver bells chime. If I were a kid, on a snowboard I would ride to feel the thrill of magical winter everywhere... have you noticed how peaceful it is outside? I lean on the windowsill to stare at the monotonous, white sky... underneath it, all trees are covered with snow so fluffy and dry. It would be nice to hear the warbling of a timid canary, to melt away some of the boredom in this afternoon, because no joyful words can be written without harmony... not even a painter would feel inspired as in other seasons, unless restlessness forces him to paint snowy sceneries. I should brave the cold and take a brief walk, making the first footprints in the soft snow... greeting folks I often meet by the oldest oak; and conversing with them on the same park bench, I can reminisce past winters... and as our loud laughter echoes through the solitary pine groves, daylight dimmers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/28/2010 7:24:00 PM
I dared not venture out when we had a little spell of winter last week. The thin layer of snow covered treacherous ice. Seattle streets were at a standstill. You describe it beautifully. Congratulations. Loe, joyce
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Date: 11/28/2010 6:29:00 PM
congrats to you Andrew! You walk in that if you like...I'll walk here in Florida. Today's temp= 80 :) congrats again!
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:27:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in Carol's cool contest with this exceptional entry on welcoming Winter my friend.. enjoy your special honor this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:55:00 PM
Andrew, Congratulations on your worthy poem's recognition in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on this honorable mention in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:15:00 PM
Andrew, I hated marring the snow with my footprints, but you pain a beautiful image here. Congratulations on your success in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my "Welcoming Winter"contest Andrew. Love, Carol 11/28/2010
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:43:00 AM
You have a keen sense of observation and equally to put it into fantastic images
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Date: 11/9/2010 1:06:00 AM
Lovely play with images that capture the delight of this season.. good luck in the contest, andrew! warmest, nette
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