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Invisible To the Eye

One glance from her eyes so dark and brown putting me under her spell, my world spun around & her voice of pure velvet enlightend my inner thoughts in which my mind mind drifts through the magic of her laughter and while she uplifts my soul from the ground and as the days count down the day will finally set for my queen to be crowned. She is my dream at night, all I can invision is her stealing the spotlight and as she make other females jealous of her perpetual beauty all I can say to her is Baby what are you doing to me? her swaying hips luscious lips her admirablle smile somebody stop me because one more look of her delightful & exquisite analysis may hold me up for trial. I close my eyes and try to imagine what our future will turn out as see there is more to your beauty than sex appeals Not alot of brothas know that you have class yet again you uplift my soul from the ground and as I lay my head upon my chest the only tune I love listening to is your heart pound. Her Personality is her Game & physical attractiveness is pure fame all the childish picc up lines from other brothas is what she calls lame aside from them, i drop my head with the doubt of never having her yet she raises my head and seales me with a kiss and say, WE ARE EQUALLY THE SAME

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Date: 6/13/2011 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Mel. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:50:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Mel
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Date: 6/10/2011 4:49:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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