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Invisible

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Invisible

invisible
soft silk or metal
maybe divisible
her weight in lead my fate
private treasury
infeasible

©Ellie Daphne
POEM OF COMPRESSION Free Poetry Contest
9/23/013

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:11:00 AM
    Great job, congrats.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:28:00 PM
    Ellie, ... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 9:59:00 AM
    Ellie, congrats on your winning poem! Well done! Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 8:24:00 PM
    Ellie .......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 5:33:00 AM
    Very dramatic winning poem..Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 1:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on the winners' list!!

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 10:36:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Very nice approach here Ellie.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 2:34:00 PM
    Very interesting piece you've penned. I like that I really have no idea what you mean exactly, and I can make up my own mind as to what you might mean. Loved the brevity. Cool poem to ponder :)