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Invisible

It is empty and cold here Even with all these people. Like a big blur in the corner I stand and watch the commotion. They laugh, they smile, they speak And no one remembers me No one acknowledges me. It is dark Even though there are lights everywhere. And I, the shadow; the ghost; the figment of imagination... I watch. And watch. And then it is truly dark. Everyone is gone and I stand. It is truly warm. And the silence is the loudest commotion of all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/16/2011 8:07:00 PM
Thanks for leaving comments on my poem, Isioma. Interesting poem...good job! J.A.
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