Invasion

One sunny day I went down at the sea Enjoying the breeze and all I could see The mighty waves were far gone When in rolled a wild one! Invasion by sand! every inch of me!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/30/2010 11:29:00 AM

this is funny, i hate when that happens to me, enjoyed,..p.d.

James Ray Morris

Date: 3/6/2010 12:47:00 PM

This one got me to laugh. Loved the idea of invasion by sand.... James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2010 9:04:00 PM

This is quite cute, Audrey! How are you today? LUv, Andrea

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/1/2010 1:46:00 PM

I loved reading this limerick:),lovely,sweet:) and tnks for ...tnks..Charma

Marty Owens

Date: 3/1/2010 1:00:00 PM

I love this poem Audrey...Enjoyed...MartyI think you have the comments removed already...I got a letter with this in it today...Is there a problem?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/1/2010 11:29:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Audrey. Please continue with your writing and keep sharing it with us. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/1/2010 6:13:00 AM

Just a quick "hello" .. my BBF ..going to be busy today with my son.. leaving.. just posted a new blog about it ..it will explain.. luv and thankxxx.. Linda-Marie..

David Byrne

Date: 2/28/2010 9:22:00 PM

I can smell the salt!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/28/2010 8:08:00 PM

Nice write, Audrey and fun to read. Great limerick. I haven't written in this format yet, but I will try it one of these days. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/28/2010 6:01:00 PM

don't you hate that, the sand in the valley is the worst, it is hard to get out even in the shower. HAHA

Skat A

Date: 2/28/2010 5:49:00 PM

Cute limerick enjoyed reading. Have a great night..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2010 3:27:00 PM

Very cute Audrey.. wish we could both have some sand invasion right about now.. yes? being on the nice warm beach sunning ourselves... alas I digress... sorry ..your poem put me in the mood for Summer.. wonderful write my BBF..luv..Linda-Marie.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/28/2010 2:41:00 PM

laughing! great fun! Audrey! and thanks for your frequent support! jamesy

Susan Palli

Date: 2/28/2010 1:28:00 PM

ouch!

Anonymous Norman

Date: 2/28/2010 12:53:00 PM