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Intrinsic Invisibility

Mild to wild wind storm. Narrow visibility. Intrepid Intrigue!

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Mitch White

Date: 3/19/2010 2:54:00 AM

Christopher said it best- this time ignorance is not bliss! Congrats on your win, Marty Poetry Soup needs you.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/17/2010 5:49:00 PM

excellent Haiku Marty! ....... enjoyed the comments.to this poem...You know Marty..,funny thing ..when I was an ignorant kid,..I hated anything that I was incapable of understanding or doing to any good effect. And funny thing about that was that attitude contributed to a self induced false pride..After a while I started to grow up..still growing... Huh! Funny thing about that. ...anyway Once again..I like your poem lots.! -Robert

James Fraser

Date: 3/14/2010 4:02:00 PM

I nice touch of science in this Haiku Marty > a man after my own heart >> James

John Beam

Date: 3/13/2010 7:25:00 PM

those letters were not there should say nice computers for ya supposed be in the other box

John Beam

Date: 3/13/2010 7:22:00 PM

nicdryke haiku never let others opinions drive you any where congrats to you also thanks for sharing

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/13/2010 2:15:00 PM

Hi Marty! Allow me to give an answer to Sylvias comment: She should explain why she hates Haikus. Haikus should create phantasy and mind. The Japanese had and still have great poets! I do not want to insult her, but Haikus and Senryus and Tankas are a firm part of poetry and should be also accepted as such. Like your Haiku, Marty! Keep your Haiku and Senryu pen flowing!...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2010 7:51:00 PM

Luv that last line .. luv alliteration when writing .. makes the poem special I think.. your title it very cool too..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Date: 3/10/2010 4:38:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration for a interesting perspective. Much for the reader to think about in this concise poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Skat A

Date: 3/10/2010 3:54:00 PM

One thing I do not understand is if u read haiku in the open page. Why would one read it. She does that to all haiku She does not see the beauty in these poems. She needs to get a life or go to another website. Like a dark one. No haiku thier..By the way enjoyed...

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/10/2010 3:03:00 PM

hair messy?

Marty Owens

Date: 3/10/2010 2:35:00 PM

Let me explain this one...I don't want anyone to hate Haiku's... My meaning is that Invisible tragedies strike and it's a mystery to everyone why they do. Anyone else want to comment...feel free... Marty

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 3/10/2010 1:55:00 PM

Liked this a lot Marty thanks for your support Daniel