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Into the Sunlight

Walking into fading sunlight The sun setting so slow Brilliant color captivating Like shore waves steady flow Come walk with me my companion Into the golden sunset Let's enjoy our life's rich ending Coated with no regrets Let's enjoy each precious moment Forgiving all mistakes Look at that wonderful sunset Filled with constant embrace Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Contest: Into The Sunset Date written: 05-11-2014 Theme: Sunsets

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Date: 5/26/2014 1:19:00 PM
I see this so vividly... nice!
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Date: 5/17/2014 2:21:00 PM
Dear Sara, I love your approach to this contest, making the sunset the end of life's journey. Indeed, "Let's enjoy each precious moment." So beautiful, my friend. Congratulations on your win! Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2014 6:30:00 AM
Well penned Sara...congrats on your win
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Date: 5/16/2014 11:01:00 PM
this is sure nice, Sara. Can't believe I did not see it yet. Congrats to you.
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Date: 5/16/2014 8:05:00 PM
A true delight. So glad I've read this one today. Top-notch.
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Date: 5/16/2014 3:42:00 PM
Lovely, Sara. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/16/2014 8:56:00 AM
Sara, I think you will enjoy that wonderful sunset...I enjoyed your poem and was glad to see you win another..BG
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Date: 5/16/2014 5:41:00 AM
Wow loved that constant embrace of sunset Sara! Great poem n so is the win , congrats !
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Date: 5/16/2014 4:36:00 AM
Sara love this poem its so full of life ty for your support congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:38:00 PM
Lovely picture and sentiments, Sara.
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Date: 5/13/2014 6:48:00 AM
wonderful write Sara,best wishes in the contest
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Date: 5/11/2014 11:56:00 PM
A beautiful poem to enjoy nature and a breathtaking sunset that u described in lovely rhyme and sentence. Tc.
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Date: 5/11/2014 11:53:00 PM
HOLY COW! A truly wonderful contest entry. I mean fantastic.. Good luck my friend.
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Date: 5/11/2014 8:04:00 PM
I love sunsets... I think they are so romantic... this is a beautiful read. so soothing ... hugs
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Date: 5/11/2014 6:16:00 PM
beautiful write, my friend
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Date: 5/11/2014 5:18:00 PM
Sara, My friend, This is simply sweet and precious and very Wonderfully expressed, every word. Just beautiful. Thanks for sharing and best of best wishes in the contest. Thanks for visiting me too:-) Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/11/2014 4:38:00 PM
Sara, this is a lovely poem on sunsets, it felt so tranquil, best of luck in the contest
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Date: 5/11/2014 1:45:00 PM
what a splendid melody, for the sunlight, sara... precious is the word.. huggs
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Date: 5/11/2014 10:40:00 AM
Like Walking Into Her Ocean, Sweet Beautiful Sara...Loving Her Kissing Her Caressing Her....Beautiful, And Happy Mother's Day...Love, Jeremy *
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Date: 5/11/2014 10:21:00 AM
Another true gem!! A pure delight reading your writes..
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Date: 5/11/2014 8:53:00 AM
- Romantic poetry Sara - Good luck in the contest!   - HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY TO YOU! -   (In Norway we celebrate Mother's Day in February) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/11/2014 8:52:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem..:) Happy Mother's Day Sara..:) love reading your writes..:)GBU,olive
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Date: 5/11/2014 7:35:00 AM
Beautiful work here Sara!
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