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Into a Crimson Sea----Five Lines

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A sound of bedtime prayers are in the trees, where the doves have nestled among the leaves. They smooth the feathers of a restless day. Like the night-birds,... my worries lift away, sailing far, into twilight's crimson seas.
_________________________________ 5/17/15 For The Contest: Five Lines/Metaphors and Simile Sponsored By Sara Kendrick Form: Enveloped Quintet

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Date: 6/30/2015 10:49:00 PM
Carrie Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:11:00 AM
I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. I like the way you went with your topic.. Congrats on your win …Sara
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Carrie Richards
Date: 6/30/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara ! It was a wonderful contest, and I enjoyed writing this one !! Thanks much for my placement, I am honored !:)
Date: 6/29/2015 10:34:00 PM
the smooth the feathers line was brilliant, Carrie. BIG congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/29/2015 6:42:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win a 7. Judy is right, Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/18/2015 7:22:00 PM
Best 5 Lines I ever read.....
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Date: 6/18/2015 12:53:00 AM
I like the idea of prayers smoothing the feathers of a restless day! Great metaphor, Carrie. An excellent poem, too :)
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