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I gave her the quiver, teeth and tongue a tornado in that fever fruit, she offered the slick sin, the skin of savage symphony, it was a technique of tender tickle the absence of which producing terrifying tease, inner thighs tight on my cheeks in a moment of sprayed splenor, her hands around my head as if they were a crown, sex sinking so deep into nerves that love was pain with a demand, hair of tangled trust entwined in my grip of desperate possession, she got my every inch, several at that and dared no more, in my thrust towards heroism the serenity of helplessness overcame me and I knew she was my Queen, nails in my ribs and her bite on my neck, our fragilities made of us beasts conquering falsehoods of fatality, names encoded in sweat and scratches - J.A.B.

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Date: 9/5/2013 1:57:00 AM
Intensely passionate write....Great use of imagery...Moving
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Justin Bordner
Date: 9/5/2013 2:37:00 PM
Very moving indeed Eileen - thank you - J.A.B. %
Date: 2/14/2013 8:18:00 PM
JUSTIN, Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/15/2013 1:36:00 PM
My comments are kind for you my Sphinx because your talent is a gift, your friendship a smile in the light of inspiration - Thanks for the sweetness Linda - J.A.B. %
Date: 2/4/2013 4:16:00 PM
Now this is one sultry write. Mmmhmmm, that is HOT. Your on fire lol. Sounds like an awesome time.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/5/2013 12:59:00 PM
Thats what she said - Good Times indeed Jay - don't encourage me! Delighted that this experience is good for you - J.A.B. %
Date: 2/4/2013 2:05:00 PM
Hey Justin! Wow - such passion, worded so impressively. Love the fifth line the best--but seriously, all was great. Hope you're well and keep up the great work. Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/5/2013 12:53:00 PM
Life has been good & true to me, especially the more I learn to interprate it effectively Laura - Yeah, those were fun lines - J.A.B. %
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/5/2013 1:24:00 AM
and line 8 :)
Date: 2/1/2013 5:37:00 PM
About your poem: fever fruit* WOW *Justin, the poem is filled of passion, and the most wonderful feeling of intimacy. I guess I will end my comment in a very respectful WOW~ About them cheeks... wink! mmmmmmmmm to the fever fruit once again...PD
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/4/2013 12:57:00 PM
Yes my Sphinx, unrehearsed intimacy is a bounty of the most tasteful giving - so glad that you visited again - J.A.B. %
Date: 2/1/2013 5:31:00 PM
Hello J.A.B. i must say it is nice to put a face with your poetry.. ha, not that I mind the awesome avatars you had on your account. xox~PD
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/4/2013 12:49:00 PM
I am happy that you like my face PD. - your images are very intriguing as well - the best pictures of all though are the ones that your Divine poetry produce - J.A.B. %
Date: 2/1/2013 4:55:00 PM
Boy do I remember those days long ago when love was so passionate. Nice to be young. Enjoy for fifty something sneaks up on ya!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/4/2013 12:46:00 PM
Intermediate life changing cycles are very real indeed Donna - bio-rhythms, appetites, stamina are susceptable to change for better or worse as we age, but hey, lets break some biological rules! J.A.B. %

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