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Intercession

I say the wrong things My obsession is to blame~~~ Let heart intercede Eileen Manassian

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/9/2014 12:05:00 PM

It's easy to blame, yes ~ so easy to blame, much better to let the heart intercede as you say - Excellent poem. I love it. Happy Writing and God Bless You.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/9/2014 12:08:00 PM

Thanks, Regina. Kind of you to visit and leave a little gift for me. Bless you too, my dear. Hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/6/2014 3:37:00 PM

i believe the first, one says in most situations comes straight from the heart''' even poetry, sometimes when going back in there, especially to hopefully improve it, does not auger well with the sentiment, although may to the purist,,,i like what you write simple as that,,and i like because it comes from within, something not even education can place there..far too much manufacture feelings and in poetry into days world,,i know the genuine article, Eileen, and your poetry certainly is that....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/9/2014 12:07:00 PM

Harry...you encourage me to keep writing. This post of yours, about leaving things as is and letting the original intent of the heart come through, whether in words or in writing has touched my heart. Thank you for your kindness to me, Harry. Don't stay away so long. Hugs

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/6/2014 12:56:00 PM

Thanks for writing this for me:) joking, It does sound like you wrote it for me, even though I know better. I just wrote a Haiki frenzy the other day but, only posted one. Only read it if you know or like CG Jung.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/6/2014 2:14:00 PM

Thanks for reading, JS. I'm a very emotional person...and very honest. I wish I weren't at times. Anyway...I did read your CG Jung...and since I didn't want to sound ignorant, I didn't comment. Don't know who he is....Sorry!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/6/2014 9:12:00 AM

The tongue is indeed a hard thing to tame. Fortunately you have mastered your pen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/6/2014 2:13:00 PM

Thanks, Richard. My pen tends to be unruly as well. Perhaps they both need a rest....

Saba Khan

Date: 8/6/2014 4:26:00 AM

That's good write! Stay Blessed!:)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/6/2014 2:12:00 PM

Thanks, Saba. Will be your way soon! :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/5/2014 8:53:00 PM

This is a very pretty write Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/6/2014 1:58:00 AM

I like pretty! It is such a PRETTY WORD! :) Thanks, Justin. You always know what to write.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/5/2014 3:55:00 PM

I can see me there in this senryu saying the wrong things without thought..but the dum tek tek of my heart.Enjoyed this senryu dear .

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/6/2014 1:57:00 AM

Thanks, my sweet. You and I seem to have a lot in common....Kindred spirits of a sort. Love ya!