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Intense Attraction

What we had was very intense. From the moment we met you could feel it almost instantly. Through the fighting and the name calling and especially the hugs you could feel a deep passion a deep fire that wasn't going to burn out. When we kissed it was something intense something we never got tired of doing... yet always lead to where it was heading. I missed those oppurunities where I could relinquish the fire just a little bit. Just one touch had some kind of easing effect to the need in my body burning. It was real and I could never convince myself otherwise. I just wish that I could have had some time to enjoy the sweet taste of my lips against yours. Cause truly a clock was ticking. A clock I never got to see... I never realized how close to goodbye things really were until the clock stopped ticking. Just like that... my plane to paradise crashed and even though I survived with barely a scratch I will always think about the island and how it would have been if the ride would have lasted. If our lives wouldn't have been so hetic and we had loads of time to just chill would I have been as happy as I thought I would be. Or was all the lost feeling and over analyzing just my imagination running.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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