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Instant Telegram

View the mountain peaks, So majestic in the sky. Climbing a great feat. Poetry Title: Instant Telegram Poetry Contest Deadline: Wednesday, March 16, 2016 at 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Nathan D. Contest Description: Haiku poetry form : 5, 7, 5.

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Deborah Burch

Date: 1/10/2017 10:38:00 PM

Nicely done!! Rainbow!! Big Hugggs. Deb

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 2/23/2016 4:12:00 PM

sharp gem you've penned.

C T

Date: 2/19/2016 12:06:00 AM

looks like a winner. CT

Rainbow Promise
Date: 2/20/2016 1:00:00 PM

Thanks C.T. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the encouragement which not only makes me hopeful for the poem, but life itself. Best wishes,RP.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/18/2016 3:25:00 AM

- Beautiful haiku, Rainbow :) - Good luck ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rainbow Promise
Date: 2/18/2016 8:42:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise, hugs too. There are only ten places, a hard fight. I do need your good luck!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 12:56:00 AM

Rainbow Promise, wonderful imagery, beyond beauty in a telegram. enjoyed. LINDA

Rainbow Promise
Date: 2/18/2016 8:44:00 AM

My fellow poet, I imagined looking down from that mountain top! Glad to send a telegram from up there that you could enjoy. Best wishes to you.

Tim Smith

Date: 2/17/2016 11:39:00 PM

I like the multiple meanings. Well done.

Rainbow Promise
Date: 2/18/2016 8:48:00 AM

Thanks Joseph, hope you enjoyed the imaginary view from up there too. Glad my telegram appealed to you. Best wishes, RR.

Rainbow Promise
Date: 2/18/2016 8:46:00 AM

On each line I tried to tell a story in this very short poem. Glad you liked it Tim. Thanks for the "well done" hugs, RP.