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Listen my poet, try to understand Feel my breath as I whisper in your ear I will try not to make a harsh demand I will take you to places far and near You can go places you have never been Feel my breath as I whisper in your ear Not listening would truly be a sin Please do not ignore the message I bring You can go places you have never been Soar among the Eagles, let your soul sing If you do it right, your words will survive Please don't ignore, the message I bring Through your writing you are truly alive My gift your courage to do what you do If you do it right, your words will survive I am not a liar, I'll say what's true Listen my poet, try to understand My gift your courage to do what you do I will try not to make a harsh demand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/25/2013 12:32:00 AM
I'm listening....I will follow.... Ah....Terzanelle
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 6:50:00 AM
Thanks again Eileen.
Date: 11/18/2012 6:37:00 PM
Thank you for your kind compliment. It is a privilege to have such a fine student. [Now give me some periods ;)] please do write this form more now you have it learned so well! Light & Love
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Date: 11/18/2012 12:06:00 AM
Whoa Richard! You really are a fast learner! This is GREAT, and nice advice for poets.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/18/2012 12:47:00 AM
Thanks Vicky, you just added a smile to my evening. Sweet Dreams my friend.
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Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 11/18/2012 12:08:00 AM
You're giving me inspiration to try the form again.
Date: 11/16/2012 10:02:00 AM
this is so inspiring Richard, excellent poem..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/16/2012 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Harry, I appreciate you!
Date: 11/16/2012 6:36:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work this morn..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/16/2012 6:44:00 AM
Thanks Sara, playing with a new style.
Date: 11/16/2012 6:20:00 AM
WOW! You is up bright and early this morning sharing your inspiring poetry with us! Have a ding dong super day, my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/16/2012 6:25:00 AM
Thanks Jack, second attempt at this new style, trying to get the hang of it. Re-read my Hopeless poem and let me know what you think. Message below was for Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/16/2012 6:22:00 AM
You may wish to read again now that it is finished. I will come and check out what you have written.
Date: 11/16/2012 5:59:00 AM
I even listen to the wind everything everyone has a message,great write Richard,check out my latest
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