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Inside the Young Emo Heart

Black tears Dark years Many fears No cheers I am sad I am mad Things are bad Haters are glad Cold nights I wept Hoping secrets we’re kept The wind often called But I always stalled So depressingly here I lay So ready to pass away.

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Skat A

Date: 5/6/2016 9:59:00 PM

JESSICA CRUDUP, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2016 6:05:00 PM

jessica, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~

Susan Palli

Date: 12/5/2010 2:21:00 AM

can feel the emptiness

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/1/2010 6:00:00 AM

Diggin' this flow...very nice. Always be sure to shine.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2010 4:11:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jessica. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/29/2010 7:38:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight with its interesting theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and full of sharing with luv..