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Inside To stand you anymore my head will burst you're rotten to the core and maybe even worst My eyes are closed I can't stand your sight just get out and leave before we start to fight What you are inside is a true disgrace but you hide it all behind that face To people and folks you seem innocent but to me you are so crooked and bent Just go away I can't stand your sight move from here before we start to fight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/30/2009 1:42:00 AM
i like the way u write your poems and express your feeling clearly.
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Date: 3/31/2009 3:17:00 PM
I agree with Karens sentiments. Sometimes you gotta say what you gotta say and you said it well, Maryam! I enjoyed the contrast between both of your poems. Love, Robin
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Date: 3/31/2009 3:09:00 PM
For those that treat others badly, the tide often turns against them. The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Sad that people choose to hurt others instead of building them up. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Keep on writing!! Karen
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