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Do I even matter to you? 
Sometimes I don't think
that what you say is true.
You say you love me
but is it for real?
I know it's hard to see,
but is it that hard to feel?
I know I love you,
but that love is
growing weak.
You can't prove to be true,
and that's what brings
me to my knees.
I keep writing and writing
just wondering when
my heart is gonna pop.
I keep fighting and fighting
but the words
don't seem to ever stop.
Poerty is a disease,
but it somehow 
cures the pain.
It lets out all of the feelings
that I'm trying to sustain.
I write about you alot
because you always seem
to be on my mind.
Depression has stolen 
most of my thoughts,
but I think I'll be fine.
You are the cause 
of all my sadness
and because of you
my heart is in pain.
I don't know what to do anymore
with all of this madness
but I know it's driving me insane.

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  1. Date: 3/26/2010 10:52:00 AM
    ohmigosh...beautiful, and heart touching, and well, ive been here alot <3

  1. Date: 1/12/2010 10:24:00 AM
    This is a powerful write Serenity that many will be able to relate with on some level. I know I do...been through the pain and the heartache when you come to the realization that the one you love does not seem to love you as much as you need. Keep on writing it is the best way to get the emotions out! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your kind comments! All is truly appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary

  1. Date: 1/11/2010 11:00:00 AM
    i feeel you been there definitely but chin up and keep writing to get it out. besides that i truely love this poem heartache is the worst pain ever.