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Inner Thoughts

As I sit here and gaze upon the vast ocean of infinite stars I ask myself are we ever really alone... Or do the souls and spirits of our lost loved ones look down on us in agonizing pain, pain and sorrow not for themselves for they are now free.. But on our pitiful minds not able to grasp the truths and reality for we are the ones who are truly imprisoned by our own hate and despair impairing our eyes to see what really is.

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Skat A

Date: 4/20/2016 12:10:00 AM

David, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

David Garcia

Date: 4/14/2016 12:04:00 AM

Thanks everyone for the positive feedback and if you have any constructive criticism I welcome it.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/13/2016 2:14:00 AM

Hi David, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2016 8:12:00 PM

David, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@