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One ingredient of the artists is woman 
That is why they love their mothers
I love to become an artist
So I will love my mother
She is the precious ingredient of my life
Not less than the love that speaks out itself
She is my womb when I was alone
She is my hug when I am in tears
Now I am old still I love her
I love her, I love her, I love her
So much...
I need to be old for me to get young
I realized that in my younger days
I don’t give a damn to loving her
But requested many things as if I don’t care
I love my mother, please forgive me!
I love you so much 
Never and never will you leave me?
I am indeed wanted to become an artist
But the real artist is my mother
Never surrendered to hardship
I will stop not to end
Remember I wanted to become an artist
And you are my ingredient!

Neldy Jolo 
WM-KL 5:43PM
28 March 2012

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  1. Date: 1/4/2013 7:32:00 AM
    Beautiful, she gave birth to an artist, and she has the honor of watching this artist pick up brush to pen and create such masterpieces, as the enjoy them in her twilight years, may the muse knock at your door each morning when the dawn arises, and follow you into dusk, when the fire flies alight the heavens, xxx

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 5:53:00 AM
    Nelde, such heart felt words towards your mother you should frame this so she can put in on her dresser dearest woman, nothing I admire most than the view of a grateful heart, Blessings are being sent your way dear Artist, love, vie

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    Date: 3/29/2012 1:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for the appreciation vei....