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Influenza Stanza

A rippling of shivered skin Convulsing tides of sweat Induced spasms of chaotic Visions of cataclysmic madness Choking down pharmaceutical Faith in medicinal fists, full Of killers Of pain Where writhing in torsions of hotness Lapse fleetingly into delicious Snatches of delusional sleep and Dream; among corpses of influenza victims Laid bare by blinding Headaches splitting Muscle mucus into Coughing fits of Laughter why me To peel apart the cocoon Of a drug sloughed illness Where the silhouette of humanity Sings your recovery Over a beaten body 28 August 2014

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Date: 5/5/2015 7:19:00 PM
The side effects of the medication can be just as hard to cope with as the illness itself... Congrats on your win with this very expressive write. Great work, Mark!
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Mark Trichet
Date: 5/8/2015 5:13:00 PM
Hey thanx Kelly. I wrote this not long after recovering from the worst influenza I have ever had...
Date: 5/3/2015 10:33:00 PM
Mark, Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the support. SKAT
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Mark Trichet
Date: 5/4/2015 4:03:00 AM
Thanks SKAT A for placing me in your contest.
Date: 9/4/2014 9:26:00 AM
a really unique take. well done.
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/4/2014 9:39:00 PM
Thanks Maurice for the visits, I appreciate it

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