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Infidelity

Whispers in a darkened room Two bodies locked in passions dance Lust and longing both consume Exploring hands enhance Sacred vows lie on the floor Discarded with their clothes Craving love, they search for more Trust lost in the throes Sated bodies, guilty hearts Have failed to fill the void Did they really just make love Or was it just destroyed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2012 5:30:00 PM
Really loved this poem from the moment I saw it. I forgot to fav it so i''m faving it now. LOVE the ending :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 2/26/2012 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Susan. I really appreciate that.
Date: 11/7/2011 5:48:00 AM
A belated congratulations I am sending you this morning for your 1st Place win in Susan's "Cheater, Cheater" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/7/2011 10:36:00 AM
Thanks so much Carol
Date: 11/5/2011 4:05:00 PM
A much deserved win! i wish i wrote this good (: im impressed :) congrats!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/5/2011 10:32:00 PM
I appreciate your kind words Roxanna. Thank you
Date: 11/5/2011 12:30:00 PM
There's a big difference between having sex and making love, Bob. Beautifully written poem. Congrats on taking first place! Love, Carolyn
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/5/2011 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn
Date: 11/5/2011 9:54:00 AM
Very nice congrats!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/5/2011 9:58:00 AM
Thanks much Ed
Date: 11/5/2011 7:07:00 AM
Congrats Bob on a super first place win luv..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/5/2011 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Linda-Marie
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/5/2011 8:55:00 AM
Date: 11/4/2011 8:35:00 PM
wow,that last stanza rocks!! Kind of like the one I wrote (the message of it!). Congrats on your win, Bob.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/4/2011 10:12:00 PM
Definitely some similarities. Thanks for your comments Andrea
Date: 11/4/2011 5:20:00 PM
Great win Bob. Congratulations. Wonderful entry. Love, Joyce
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/4/2011 10:11:00 PM
I appreciate that Joyce
Date: 11/4/2011 1:37:00 PM
Terrific!!!Great win..Valerie
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/4/2011 2:17:00 PM
Thank you Valerie
Date: 10/25/2011 9:04:00 AM
I am going with.....D-E_S_T_R_O_Y_E_D!.... A great write, Bob. Killerific! Gwendolen
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/25/2011 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Gwendolen

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