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I could write a thousand words and still fail to capture your absolute beauty. A thousand verses of sublime rhyme and fall short of the intent of my love for you. A thousand dreams in the glittering of stars, all is nought to where you take me. And the love song that I write would only emulate the beating of this heart, a long slow pulse of absence. I take the hand of my muse in thought and feeling, ever to caress that day when I first said I loved you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2011 8:37:00 AM
This is just enthralling and eloquent, I love the phrasing of your words, you would surely capture this girls heart with such beautiful poetry~~
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Date: 1/5/2011 7:42:00 AM
I absolutely love this romantic and expressive write of yours Daniel. Interesting title as well, thanks for the smiles.. Sweet indeed ~ Wilma
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Date: 1/3/2011 6:16:00 PM
What a romantic poet does reside in you Daniel! Wonderful poem.Happy New Year-kashinath
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Date: 1/3/2011 4:28:00 PM
So passionate and expressive work...I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve the romance lifts my spirits..Sara
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Date: 1/3/2011 9:53:00 AM
Aaah sigh... as always in awe of the wonderous beauty , the delightful sentiment and completely in love with the words of love you write...Always your friend Allie...
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Date: 1/3/2011 6:51:00 AM
titled perfectly. john h loving iii
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:05:00 AM
Beautiful romantic write my friend...Enjoyed very much....Michael
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