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Independence Day

Come let's celebrate the fourth of July With baseball, hot dogs, and Mom's apple pie We're sure to ignite Fireworks at night So head on over, we'll light up the sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Len Gasun
Date: 7/5/2015 10:53:00 AM
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Wow! A great celebration indeed my dear friend, Tim. I enjoyed your poem so much. Thanks a lot for sharing and Belated Happy 4th of July! Btw, thank you so much as well for sharing your precious time to read my latest poem. love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Kp Nunez
Date: 7/5/2015 7:57:00 AM
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Very good, Tim. Americans really celebrate Independence Day. Ours is celebrated much more quietly. Hope you had a great 4th!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 7/3/2015 7:17:00 PM
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Sounds wonderful Tim!! A Perfect Limerick indeed on America's Special Day!! Say Hello to the USA for me since I'm over here in Germany. My thoughts on the 4th, however, will be with my family, relatives, and friends back in the USA and the big celebration on this day for all of the great things our country stands for as the Home of Democracy and Land of the Brave!! Best Always, Gary
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 7/3/2015 7:07:00 PM
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Nicely written limerick Tim... I trust the celebrations will be immense up your way - Lindsay
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2015 7:11:00 PM
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Thanks Lindsay...The fireworks have been going off for days and with it falling on a Saturday....it will be crazy
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Constance La France
Date: 7/3/2015 6:43:00 PM
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Tim, this is a great independence day limerick, a sure winner, 10 and thanks for visiting my poetry
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2015 7:09:00 PM
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Thank you BW...have a great weekend
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/3/2015 4:27:00 PM
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I like both hot dog and apple pie ..I do have a baseball hat too..So a toast to celebrations . : ).Lovely Limerick.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2015 4:29:00 PM
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I have over 50 baseball hats : ) ... If you like I'll send you one...cheers to celebrations....hugs Tim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2015 4:14:00 PM
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Very well written. Your patriotic feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your friendly words. Emile.
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2015 4:30:00 PM
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Thank you my friend...Tim
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/3/2015 3:23:00 PM
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A great limerick for the fourth of July, Tim! Love, Kim
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2015 4:33:00 PM
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Enjoy your fourth Kim : )
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/3/2015 2:05:00 PM
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very cute and with great rhythm!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 7/3/2015 4:36:00 PM
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Thanks Andrea !!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/3/2015 2:05:00 PM
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You should do an acrostic one now, for the contest!
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