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Incomplete

Through roaming hills, and blistering winds my spirit lay somewhere between. Oh someone point him out to me, I desire to hear my soul sing For at first he left, I did not notice my emotions to mangled in muck but I feel my heart fall short and my body just want to give up I call to him through the wind in the night but no reply is heard in the breeze. I shout his name from dawn to dusk But only a echo replies in the trees Forgive me! I cry, I desire you now that my heart is darken and numb. For I gladly give up this emotionless feast to live my life wondering the streets forsaking the world and all of its treats to live with my spirit as a bum

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Date: 4/15/2012 6:57:00 AM
Very nice writing, if your soul is "incomplete" , from an outside view your poem is complete with a lot of feelings, metaphors and i like most this " the desire to hear the soul sing'!
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Date: 12/5/2011 5:37:00 AM
awesome write girl. loved the grand finally.
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