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In Your Dreams

The empire of my Love stands on the pillar of your strength! All judgement is yours power and passion a beautiful synchronization I follow your course like a slave follows his master chained with a desire to reach you like a bird's aspirations for the sky! every single breath I take your lustrous skin causes reverberations in my heart my heart melts FOLLOWED BY A PERFECT UNION suddenly A TRAIN OF THOUGHTS TRANSCENDS MY CONSCIENCE ONCE AGAIN I DIVE IN YOUR SEA OF DREAMS copyright 2011 by Smriti Jha for a very special one....

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 12/4/2011 4:52:00 AM

A very lucky one too . Last stanza is beautiful ,well done!

Wayne Hill

Date: 10/2/2011 1:19:00 PM

I think a better title would be Diving into Your Sea Of Dreams. i will submit as such if this is O.K.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/30/2011 4:34:00 PM

Smriti I love it , dramatic and full of emotion . Anne

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/28/2011 9:47:00 PM

Great Mystical Poem! Where are you writing from? Yours Matthew Anish

Diwakar Pokhriyal

Date: 5/24/2011 11:29:00 PM

LOVELY ONE

Chhutan Dey

Date: 5/24/2011 4:56:00 PM

I FOUND DEEP LOVE COUPLED WITH A LITTLE CONTRADICTION..MARVELOUS DEAR

Chhutan Dey

Date: 5/24/2011 4:54:00 PM

I FOUND DEEP COUPLED WITH A LITTLE CONTRADICTION...MARVELOUS DEAR!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/24/2011 6:32:00 AM

Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Smriti. Love, Carol

John Aaron Green

Date: 5/24/2011 4:19:00 AM

such a wonderful write, you have within you, the power to change lives, and it is a gift from God..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/24/2011 4:05:00 AM

Wonderful simiies throughout...I can just picture the panic as almost fear if a bird weren't allowed to reach the sky... Enjoyed this romantic write. Have a blessed day! Gwendolen

Faizah Spence

Date: 5/23/2011 7:44:00 PM

Nice, "Chained with a desire to reach you"...loved it... ~Beloved Faizah

Michael Wayne

Date: 5/23/2011 7:14:00 PM

You have an interesting personality. Rebellious yet submissive in some regards..... I could read a thousand poems written by you and still find you complex and mysterious. You are a step above all poets.